tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post3169276836170194290..comments2023-05-26T11:55:26.966-04:00Comments on Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~: THE MIDNIGHT HOURDarlene ~Bloggity Blogger~http://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-59967386788315122182011-07-26T12:49:36.570-04:002011-07-26T12:49:36.570-04:00DANG i remember when i was 15, LOL music was grea...DANG i remember when i was 15, LOL music was great too great writeBrenda Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673692345871148871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-30411567726768789722011-07-26T08:11:22.677-04:002011-07-26T08:11:22.677-04:00Excellent. Led me happily up the garden path and k...Excellent. Led me happily up the garden path and knocked me on my rear with total surprise. Keep it up, Darlene *grin*Mojo Writinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09457472397010589516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-89962483512599916302011-07-25T02:20:46.901-04:002011-07-25T02:20:46.901-04:00@ Joyce. Thank you and it's very nice to meet...@ Joyce. Thank you and it's very nice to meet you.<br /><br />@ Kathy: It WAS a simpler time! I always say that I grew up in the last of the good times! If it were possible to return in time, I'd pack my bags in a NY second! Thanks!Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-37520663057015982482011-07-25T01:01:56.670-04:002011-07-25T01:01:56.670-04:00Great story!! Brings me back to a simpler time. ...Great story!! Brings me back to a simpler time. I love the music, too, that was a nice tough. Great work! :)Kathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464256966607908621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-9056988967302198692011-07-24T23:24:53.329-04:002011-07-24T23:24:53.329-04:00That is an amazing story. Well done!
Joyce
http:/...That is an amazing story. Well done!<br /><br />Joyce<br />http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2011/07/gbe2-summer.htmlCatch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-84912787772004041282011-07-24T17:11:56.272-04:002011-07-24T17:11:56.272-04:00I'm sure some part of me must still wonder wha...I'm sure some part of me must still wonder what would have happened. Otherwise, don't you think I would have forgotten the incident 48 years later? LOL Thanks, Shilo. ;-)Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-82378447402880732482011-07-24T16:15:04.147-04:002011-07-24T16:15:04.147-04:00Too funny! :-) Then I read your comment about the ...Too funny! :-) Then I read your comment about the seeds of truth and thought about how I'm sure at age 15 I would've went back and met him--not good, but true for me.Eccentricityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07034427885711017365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-47730224059790368892011-07-23T23:57:35.795-04:002011-07-23T23:57:35.795-04:00@ Laura: I was tempted to write it another way, b...@ Laura: I was tempted to write it another way, but that just didn't seem like fun. I'm happy with the fantasy of singing animals and a nice man to show the magic of midnight - in a nice way. <br /><br />@ Pink Mystique: (((HUGS))) I have missed you!!! Good to see you again. Now I am going to go read your blog. ;-) Glad you enjoyed my little fantasy.Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-22434477552429543742011-07-23T23:53:40.054-04:002011-07-23T23:53:40.054-04:00Excellent story!Excellent story!Pink Mystiquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00713037424882775572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-44703509698687914462011-07-23T23:37:39.604-04:002011-07-23T23:37:39.604-04:00Ok. I was so nervous. This was so great. I loved i...Ok. I was so nervous. This was so great. I loved it. How creative and fun. So glad the gal was safe.Laura Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04484480915813337237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-67276696312047236982011-07-23T22:22:13.504-04:002011-07-23T22:22:13.504-04:00@ Jennifer: I loved writing this one. Thank yo...@ Jennifer: I loved writing this one. Thank you, Jennifer. <br /><br />@ Susan: Thank you, Susan. Check out my archives for older stories. I've had a dry spell, but I hope I am back in my groove to write more than I have in the past few months.Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-51812104180570075622011-07-23T21:24:07.896-04:002011-07-23T21:24:07.896-04:00What a great short story! I can't wait to read...What a great short story! I can't wait to read more of your work!Susan ~ Today's Writing Womanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15357781498213225382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-78268639529189969112011-07-23T20:38:33.865-04:002011-07-23T20:38:33.865-04:00What a wonderful story! I love it!What a wonderful story! I love it!JENNIFER WILCKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16218241106543538422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-22195676529150502011-07-23T20:17:38.282-04:002011-07-23T20:17:38.282-04:00@ Langley: LOL. My real life is like fiction too...@ Langley: LOL. My real life is like fiction too. <br /><br />@ Cathy: My story almost went the other way. When I start typing, I never know how the story will end. My writing keeps me in suspense too. hahahaDarlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-73279037676099709352011-07-23T19:28:00.987-04:002011-07-23T19:28:00.987-04:00I loved this story. It drew me right in and I was ...I loved this story. It drew me right in and I was hooked. The surprise ending threw me but in a good way. Glad he turned out to be a nice guy and not a rapist as I was expecting.Cathyhttp://www.catmuses.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-75761772241910877362011-07-23T17:10:47.579-04:002011-07-23T17:10:47.579-04:00This was so well written that you got me. I'm ...This was so well written that you got me. I'm glad you said it was a work of fiction at the end or I would still be wondering. Great!Langley Cornwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02064219496272043638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-17489800478491550142011-07-23T16:40:52.589-04:002011-07-23T16:40:52.589-04:00@ Jo: Go ahead and have fun with my story. Alrea...@ Jo: Go ahead and have fun with my story. Already nuts? LOL...me too!<br /><br />@ Beth: That would be a bad situation! Yikes!<br /><br />@ Amy: When I started this story, I was undecided whether the end would be fanciful or horrible. It just kind of developed as I went along.<br /><br />@ Celeste: Thank you for your encouragement a few weeks ago when, as you know, I really needed it. I think I would still be in my rut, had you not taken the time to write me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-35210210056556516312011-07-23T16:16:17.398-04:002011-07-23T16:16:17.398-04:00Oh Darlene! I loved this story. Fantastic!Oh Darlene! I loved this story. Fantastic!Celeste Neumannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06121686507934885254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-61778908143795922062011-07-23T16:10:26.564-04:002011-07-23T16:10:26.564-04:00Fooled me as well, and I'm happy to learn this...Fooled me as well, and I'm happy to learn this wasn't the horror piece I thought it was going to be! I love being drawn in like that! Nice job!Amy McMunn https://www.blogger.com/profile/04777029840258598019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-48635196410848013452011-07-23T15:31:02.231-04:002011-07-23T15:31:02.231-04:00You got me, too! I was sure that you were putting ...You got me, too! I was sure that you were putting yourself into a really bad situation. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-4144481477848046532011-07-23T15:15:58.571-04:002011-07-23T15:15:58.571-04:00I was right there with your friend saying, "N...I was right there with your friend saying, "NO, don't go!" ha ha ha<br />Love it! Midnight at the carnival with all those mysterious people. And I am telling! Everyone already thinks I'm nuts.Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18285427147723972295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-89337223600773862002011-07-23T15:05:31.443-04:002011-07-23T15:05:31.443-04:00@ Mike - Yes you can. But I warn you...nobody wil...@ Mike - Yes you can. But I warn you...nobody will believe you!Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-48326772838057894632011-07-23T15:04:54.923-04:002011-07-23T15:04:54.923-04:00LOL... I love leading people down the primrose pa...LOL... I love leading people down the primrose path. hahaha <br /><br />As with most of my fiction, there's a seed of truth. In this case, my friend did live across the street from the fairgrounds and I did spend the night to attend the fair. No, her parents weren't drunks. I did meet a guy who wanted me to meet him after the fair closed for the night. Did I meet him? No...I'm not that stupid! hahahaDarlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-74960111041153179912011-07-23T15:01:58.290-04:002011-07-23T15:01:58.290-04:00Wow! You got me good! So...can I tell anyone? I&...Wow! You got me good! So...can I tell anyone? I'm already gray!Millerwriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00362226574347191886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-66933267426488715722011-07-23T14:49:31.639-04:002011-07-23T14:49:31.639-04:00You sooooo had me going!! I was scared that perha...You sooooo had me going!! I was scared that perhaps he was going to hurt you!! You lead me right into it--oh but I love it! Great post and take on midnight! Cheers, JennJennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07559573562599754752noreply@blogger.com