tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post836447749409298623..comments2023-05-26T11:55:26.966-04:00Comments on Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~: THIS OLD HOUSEDarlene ~Bloggity Blogger~http://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-17773005997646751792012-02-04T12:42:50.273-05:002012-02-04T12:42:50.273-05:00I am pleased when one of my stories stirs the emot...I am pleased when one of my stories stirs the emotions a bit. Thank you for saying so. I do appreciate your comment!Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-59006821264392728842012-02-04T12:41:45.741-05:002012-02-04T12:41:45.741-05:00Thank you, TD. I am grateful for your sweet comme...Thank you, TD. I am grateful for your sweet comment.Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-89623630517370247682012-02-04T12:40:30.100-05:002012-02-04T12:40:30.100-05:00The POV was not so hard since this story grew out ...The POV was not so hard since this story grew out of my own experiences with my Mom. She did not have Alzheimer Disease, but as she got older, she had her fantasies that were not lodged within reason. It was just one such fantasy that cost her life. http://dmcorl.blogspot.com/2008/11/soul-ties-old-woman-sits-in-travel.htmlDarlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-16844668731063216662012-02-03T08:32:11.062-05:002012-02-03T08:32:11.062-05:00Moving story.Moving story.Celeste Neumannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06121686507934885254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-59741936999373226642012-01-30T18:50:59.617-05:002012-01-30T18:50:59.617-05:00Beautiful imagery. Great Story!Beautiful imagery. Great Story!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05215108472653545252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-51113385806355383372012-01-29T12:52:13.440-05:002012-01-29T12:52:13.440-05:00Nicely woven Darlene! I like the shift in POV from...Nicely woven Darlene! I like the shift in POV from the mother to the daughter, and the peek inside the mind of both. One from the standpoint of their own reality, and what they are looking at, the other from the standpoint that the reality of the other is slipping. Who is to say, what is "real" to anyone. Regardless, you captured both well!k~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17308736457276683273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-68928523920423806222012-01-29T12:35:20.531-05:002012-01-29T12:35:20.531-05:00This story didn't end up the way I intended. ...This story didn't end up the way I intended. When I started this story, it was just going to be about an old woman who lived in an old house while not noticing that her home is crumbling around her. It just kind of evolved into the two points of view. I kind of like how it came out. I did post this on MySpace a couple of years ago, but I deleted all of those blogs when I left MS. So, I decided to post it here. <br /><br />Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.Darlene ~Bloggity Blogger~https://www.blogger.com/profile/08202901408911879517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6393027414870274744.post-58347367105283618572012-01-29T12:14:52.400-05:002012-01-29T12:14:52.400-05:00Wow! This is a sad but powerful story. It's in...Wow! This is a sad but powerful story. It's interesting to see the different points of view too.<br /><br />Joyce<br />http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/Catch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.com